Thursday, September 24, 2009

The Mud Run

Into the mud I went, holding Mrs Glasgow's hand. I freaked out! I was sinking down into ooey gooey mud, right up to my elbows.
With each step I sink down into the revolting, stinky mud. It feels so sticky. Sticky as glue.
I start to panic as the mud rises up to my waist. I can feel things in the mud. It fills my shorts and clings to my skin. I am scared of all the creepy crawly critters crawling on me and it feels like I'm going to sink and drown.
This is revolting!
Then suddenly, I'm out!
... But I wonder if I'll do it again next year?


By Joshua

3 comments:

  1. Very good bit of writing! That's nice that Mrs Glasgow held your hand! Even though its a short bit of writing its got VERY good qualaty!

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  2. i like the similes Joshua!!

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