I start to panic as the mud rises up to my waist. I can feel things in the mud. It fills my shorts and clings to my skin. I am scared of all the creepy crawly critters crawling on me and it feels like I'm going to sink and drown.
This is revolting!Then suddenly, I'm out!
... But I wonder if I'll do it again next year?
By Joshua
You were great! Mrs J
ReplyDeleteVery good bit of writing! That's nice that Mrs Glasgow held your hand! Even though its a short bit of writing its got VERY good qualaty!
ReplyDeletei like the similes Joshua!!
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